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Greg Bruhn's avatar

I appreciated your recognition of the details that provided a contrast (like the plastic shoes, sunglasses, and backpack) to the scene unfolding before you in the Vermont woods. It reminded me of a scene I experienced on a Blue Ridge Parkway overlook last July while en route to the Cullowhee Conference. Soon after I parked my car, I noticed a raven less than a dozen feet away in the grass in foreground of a southerly view toward the mountains along the NC/SC Border. It was an exciting moment, the last time I'd seen a raven was more than 25 years ago and it was close to half a mile away. Shortly after seeing the raven, a lady drove up without leaving her car and she had her eyes focused on her text messages. So much for being in the moment.

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Allison Gilmore's avatar

I love the way way these words feel like a poem that helps me to see what you saw and hear what you heard. And I also love it because it tells a story that leaves me wanting to know more about the grandmother and the child and what they talked about after pausing for the child's snack.

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