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Linda Chafin's avatar

You are clear from the beginning that this is a work of fiction, and a powerful one it is. I wouldn't risk diluting that power with footnotes or nitpicky changes. I believe you have something like a moral obligation to tell the story as the children experienced it, even down to knowing which way a creek runs. However, you could add an appendix about the post-publication life of this story that you tell here. Or post it on the website. Because stories never really do end, do they?

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lastinoz's avatar

If the children believed it, it is worth including even if it is not true.....you could add a footnote. Including additional details might be worth doing in an appendix, or in a postscript...it all depends on whether your intent is a true historical account, or a fictionalized account. I haven't read it, but going back and adding/changing details in the body of work may interrupt the rhythm of your writing, and sometimes details can be wearying. But congratulations on pursuing the story.

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